Saturday, July 14, 2012

list poem 21/5/12

Paper- as white as snow
Pens-waiting to start writing
Computers-taping away
Art-colorful and bright
lights-shining and sparkling
whiteboard markers-stretching over the whiteboard
Fish and chip- happily swimming away
Book-hoping someone leaves them only to rest
Chairs acting like their so strong
Notebooks being checked now and then
Draws going in and back and forth, back and forth
Charger saving the c
omputers lives
Doors Opening and shutting
by lachlan




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9 comments:

  1. Your poem makes me visualise our classroom, Lachlan.

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  2. Wow Lachlan this paints a great picture in my mind of all of the different things around the classroom. My favourite part would have to be when you said that the Chargers were saving the computers lives.
    What was your favourite part of you wonderful poem?
    WELL DONE LACHLAN:)

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  3. I love your poem.
    I love it because you have described are class really well.

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  4. Amazing poem Lachlan,
    It describes the classroom really well my faviourite one is about the charger saving the
    computers life.

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    1. That was one of my favourites too.

      Thank Sami

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  5. I didn't like, I loved it! My favourite part was the chair part, what was your favourite part?

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    1. My favourite part was the Fish and chips happily swimming away. Thanks

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  6. Cool Lachlan. My favourite part was When you said (Chargers saving the computers life).

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  7. Great nouns Lachlan its interesting and awesome.

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