Tuesday, October 23, 2012

100 word story

One day I was walking down the street and I saw something, It was red like a cherry and it looked like a mutant chicken egg I took it home to look after it. Then that night I hear a shattering sound from the bathroom, I hope out of bed and grab the torch and walked into the bathroom and saw that mutant egg thingy had cracked open, crash!  toothbrushes jars, soap and toothpaste fell. Then I saw a tail, I look up and “what is that?”I yell, I saw a... dragon! I fainted but also hit my head.

8 comments:

  1. Wow Lachlan!!!
    Cool story.
    It is very exciting and descriptive.
    Well done ,
    From Brody.

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  2. Excellent 100 word story, Lachlan!

    You have really chosen your language well and used the prompt to inspire your ideas. Did you enter it on their website? http://100wc.net/2012/10/17/100-word-challenge-week-6/

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    1. No, but I'll do it today, when I get some free time.

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  3. Cool 100 word story Post Lachlan!
    It is very well done and descriptive.
    WELL DONE.

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  4. Wow Lachlan!
    That is a very clever 100 word story. Your ending really makes me want to read another chapter.
    Will there be another chapter?

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  5. Wow Lachlan this is very cool I love how you put a photo of the Dragon.

    Great Job with the hundred word challenge!

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